The Candles

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautifully crafted poem! "The Candles" captures the importance of those who support and contribute to society without seeking recognition or acknowledgment. The imagery of candles and light adds a powerful metaphor to the message being conveyed.
  
  I really appreciate the way the poem directs attention to the unsung heroes, the holders of the candles and the lighters of the flame, who work together selflessly. It reminds us of the significance of their actions and the impact they have on our lives. The repetition of the phrase "without feeling any shame" emphasizes the contrast between those who contribute and those who do not.
  
  The poem's structure and rhythm flow nicely, maintaining a consistent tone throughout. The repetition of the line "if the candles weren't there" emphasizes the central role that candles play in our lives and adds a sense of urgency to the piece.
  
  If I may offer a suggestion for improvement, perhaps consider expanding on the consequences of a future without candles. How might society be affected? Exploring the potential yearning of the multitudes and the darkness that may envelop our world without the light offered by these selfless individuals would strengthen the poem's impact even further.
  
  Overall, "The Candles" is a thought-provoking and inspiring poem. It encourages reflection on the importance of giving and reminds us of the power of unity and selflessness. Keep up the fantastic work! more »

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