The Candles



There are those that hold the candles
while another lights the flame.
There are many doing nothing
without feeling any shame.

We all need the candles burning
without light we couldn’t bear.
Our existence would be nothing
if the candles weren’t there.

Is it fair that there are many
who not once add to the light?
Yet depend on candles glow
as they journey through the night.

While the holders of the candles
and the lighters of the flame
work in unison together.
Seek no glory, seek no fame.

What would happen to our future?
Would the multitudes be yearning?
If tomorrow turns to darkness
cause the candles have stopped burning.

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Some are watchers. Some are doers. Most others are in between.

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Written on 2012

Submitted by Giselavigil on December 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCB CDCD XEXE ABFB FCXC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 649
Words 127
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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