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Borrowed Space & Borrowed Time

Gisela Vigil 1959 (Cuba)

Free verse
At times
I crawl into a cave.
No chaos, no people,
and lay upon
the breathing soil.
Just me, myself and I.
For tomorrow
will again bring back
more time to rush,
to do some stressing.
Only in this cave
of borrowed space
and borrowed time
can I detect soft sounds
that float like feathers
through my borrowed air.
There I can hear the whispers
of wishes I’ve yet to dream,
of fears and thoughts
that I must face,
or of a feeling still unfelt.

My writing is my cave.
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Scheme XAXXXXXXXXABXXCXCXXBX A
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 482
Words 109
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 21, 1
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Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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