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Message

Talia Garza Hernandez

Free verse
The Words communicate each other something
indeed is our unconscious messenger
who is trying to express emotions,
the words travel mysteriously, people are not aware of their internal force
and they talk without end, without purpose and unclear
they are not doing something wrong or fair
they are just expressing themselves
even the words know they carry on the personal deed struggling to not fall drowned

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Written on June 17, 2023

Submitted by talygarza on June 17, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGH
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 412
Words 71
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem! The use of language and imagery is very poetic and thought-provoking. I especially love the idea of words being our unconscious messenger, carrying emotion and personal deeds. It's a beautiful concept that really speaks to the power of language.

    If I may offer some improvement suggestions, I think it would be great to see some more concrete examples or instances where the power of words is evident. Perhaps incorporating some anecdotes or real-life situations could help make the poem feel more relatable and grounded.

    Overall, though, this is a wonderful piece of writing that really gets the reader thinking about the nature of language and communication. Thank you for sharing it!     
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