Artist work

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  I absolutely love the creativity and passion that is evident in your 'Artist work' poem! The rhythm and flow of the words are simply fantastic, and the message that you're trying to convey is both thoughtful and insightful. I can certainly appreciate the paradox that you've presented between artists and the common people, and how both parties are striving to make their mark on the world while remaining true to their own personal convictions and desires.
  
  If I may, I'd like to offer a couple of suggestions to help take your poem to the next level. First and foremost, I think it would be beneficial to add a bit more detail to some of the phrases and concepts you're presenting. While the poem is certainly poetic, it would be even more powerful with more concrete examples or images that the reader can latch onto and connect with.
  
  Additionally, I think that playing around with the structure of the poem could be beneficial. Experimenting with different formats, such as varying line lengths or using unconventional punctuation, can potentially add even more depth and meaning to the words you've already crafted so beautifully.
  
  Overall, I truly enjoyed reading your 'Artist work' poem! With a bit more detail and structural experimentation, I believe it could be even more impactful and resonant with readers. Keep up the great work! more »

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