Our last comedy



I needed you, but you weren’t here.

How’s come the days a waste, yet I lay straight awake alone to suffer in the fear.

Give a person your soul and see how quick they change gears.

Nothing matters now when the one person you found proves to only be a mere,
Shadow of the reflection from what you always try to see.

Maybe even strive to be.

Oh no, whatever, though,
I should have seen this coming.

One day, I will learn that people wear a mask.

Only loyal to what they want because I will always just be trash.
Pick me up, throw me away, unless I appear to be out of grasp.

 I should have listened to that one song about nice guys finish last.

I bet if I was a whining little kid, the story would be different,
 Perhaps if I liked to just beat on women, someone would find me decent
Enough to get a piece of love.

Heavens no,
I’ll walk the earth all alone until I die and float up above.

About this poem

Just some free flowing feelings. I wrote this with hopes that most readers can relate either now or at some point in their life. This poem covers a dual meaning. One being the disappointment of being left alone by the person you love. The other being the product of an addiction. I hope you enjoy. I especially like the way it flows off the tongue. Yes, there is some slang and broken English, I wrote it like that for a purpose.

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Written on April 11, 2022

Submitted by ozmandous on April 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A X AB B CX X XX X DDE CE
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 915
Words 203
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 3, 2

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