Analysis of A shadow in the dark



A shadow in the dark

was what I saw

as I looked in the dark sky

I saw my past reflecting shadows reflecting my flaws.

I saw my shadow as it sat to cry

it was but a shadow in the dark

but a sudden hopeful bark

a shriek of help from the dark.

As I stood with my lonely thoughts

my feelings are shot

full of regrets like a criminal that's never been caught

just a lonely soul that'll sit in the dark to rot.


Scheme A X B X B A A A X C C C
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 1111 1110011 1111010101011 111111111 11101001 1010101 0111101 11111101 11011 11011010011011 1010110100111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 394
Words 86
Sentences 4
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by Akioyamoto on November 01, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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akio yamoto

I started writing when I was 17 and am currently 19 I'm writing for everyone to enjoy and to express my feelings hope yall like em. more…

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