Would You?



Would you?

 I'm speaking of desperation

 of how you left me in confusion.

 I ask in a dire momment

 I ask would you?

 Would you date me if I was the guy in your dreams

 what if I told you people arn't what they seam.

 Would you hug me and kiss me?

 Until I come to self realization of ectasy,

 until we grow old and we right down the best remedy's

 but I know you'll never love me

 like you love others

 I feel like a caged bird never to be free

 is this misery?

 So I ask again would you?

 If I was the person that fit your description

 and I was more then fiction

 would you marry me and take me on a honey moon

 would you? I only ask you this because as we speak

 I'm taking my final breaths and my trigger finger is itchin.
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Submitted by Akioyamoto on March 29, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme A A X B C X D C C D X D D B A A X X A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 708
Words 149
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

akio yamoto

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