Analysis of Birthday
I blow out the candles
and make a wish,
as I enter a new decade
with mixed feelings.
Too old to die young
but too young
to die today (God willing).
But I am now
officially old;
no escaping that fact.
I bought a one-way ticket
to old age, not knowing
if I'd ever get there.
I guess I've arrived.
Hope I have enough breath left
to blow out the candles
next year!
* * *
My restless dreams
at anchor ride,
but soon they'll sail again!
Copyright © Robert Haigh 2019
Scheme | AXXX BBC XXX XCX X XAX XXX X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111010 0101 11100101 1110 11111 111 1101110 1111 01001 101011 1101110 111110 111011 11101 1110111 111010 11 1 1101 1101 111101 10101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 473 |
Words | 93 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 3, 3, 1, 3, 1, 3, 1 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 16 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 39 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 11 |
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