Analysis of Birthday



I blow out the candles
and make a wish,
as I enter a new decade
with mixed feelings.

Too old to die young
but too young
to die today (God willing).

But I am now
officially old;
no escaping that fact.

I bought a one-way ticket
to old age, not knowing
if I'd ever get there.

I guess I've arrived.

Hope I have enough breath left
to blow out the candles
next year!

*     *     *

My restless dreams
at anchor ride,
but soon they'll sail again!

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2019


Scheme AXXX BBC XXX XCX X XAX XXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 0101 11100101 1110 11111 111 1101110 1111 01001 101011 1101110 111110 111011 11101 1110111 111010 11 1 1101 1101 111101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 473
Words 93
Sentences 8
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 3, 1, 3, 1, 3, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on August 28, 2020

Modified on April 17, 2023

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Robert Haigh

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