Analysis of Copper and Tin



You compromised on those dreams of old;
The ones you thought were silver and gold.
You traded them in
For copper and tin,
And only did what you had to do.
You'd see it through — that much I knew.

You prowl the mansions of my mind,
And hold a key to every room.
I could make you leave, but I'm not that kind,
And besides, you still light up my gloom.

I never thought I'd be without
Your physical presence or your sweet voice.
Your spirit's here still, of that there's no doubt;
But when love's fire burned low you made your choice.

You compromised on those dreams of old;
The ones you thought were silver and gold.
You traded them in
For copper and tin.
You only did what you had to do,
But you saw it through;
Leaving me here, with memories of you.

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2013


Scheme AABBcc dede fgfg AABBccc x
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 011101001 11010 11001 010111111 11111111 11010111 010111001 1111111111 001111111 11011101 1100101111 1101111111 11110111111 11011111 011101001 11010 11001 110111111 11111 1011110011 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 796
Words 153
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 7, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on July 31, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Robert Haigh

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