Analysis of Just us too
if from within us both we can find
what we surely lack, within our minds;
explore secret feelings within that dwell
when passion casts it’s wondrous spell;
two hearts that rarely skip a beat,
red whispering lips a moist warm treat;
with eyes closed tight we see into night
the worlds within us a wondrous sight,
till dawns crow wakens cool morning dew
red sun arises to begin anew
yet only sweet blackness within we see
what imprisoned our hearts sun’s light set free
and whispering winds white clouds renew
for now we are one, just me, just you
and each days joy of knowing brings
all that is wondrous that wonder brings
for what is us will forever be
the two of us, just you, just me
Scheme | ABCCDDEEFFGGFFHHGG |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110111111 1110101101 0110100111 11011101 11110101 110010111 111111011 010110101 11111101 1101010101 1101100111 10101011111 010011101 111111111 01111101 111101101 111110101 01111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 672 |
Words | 128 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 18 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 30 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 546 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 128 |
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