Just us too



if from within us both we can find
what we surely lack, within our minds;
explore secret feelings within that dwell
when passion casts it’s wondrous spell;
two hearts that rarely skip a beat,
red whispering lips a moist warm treat;
with eyes closed tight we see into night
the worlds within us a wondrous sight,
till dawns crow wakens cool morning dew
red sun arises to begin anew
yet only sweet blackness within we see
what imprisoned our hearts sun’s light set free
and whispering winds white clouds renew
for now we are one, just me, just you
and each days joy of knowing brings
all that is wondrous that wonder brings
for what is us will forever be
the two of us, just you, just me
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Submitted by coralatlas on September 18, 2014

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Scheme ABCCDDEEFFGGFFHHGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 672
Words 128
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18

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