Analysis of Be With Those Who Help Your Being

Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi 1207 (Balkh) – 1273 (Konya )



Be with those who help your being.
Don't sit with indifferent people, whose breath
comes cold out of their mouths.
Not these visible forms, your work is deeper.

A chunk of dirt thrown in the air breaks to pieces.
If you don't try to fly,
and so break yourself apart,
you will be broken open by death,
when it's too late for all you could become.

Leaves get yellow. The tree puts out fresh roots
and makes them green.
Why are you so content with a love that turns you yellow?


Scheme XAXX XXXAX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111110 1110101011 111111 11100111110 011110011110 111111 0110101 111101011 1111111101 1110011111 0111 11111010111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 473
Words 93
Sentences 9
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 13, 2023

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Mewlana Jalaluddin Rumi

Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Rūmī also known as Jalāl ad-Dīn Muhammad Balkhī, and more popularly simply as Rumi, was a 13th-century Persian poet, faqih, Islamic scholar, theologian, and Sufi mystic originally from Greater Khorasan in Greater Iran. more…

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