Analysis of The Erl-King



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WHO rides there so late through the night dark and drear?
The father it is, with his infant so dear;
He holdeth the boy tightly clasp'd in his arm,
He holdeth him safely, he keepeth him warm.

"My son, wherefore seek'st thou thy face thus to hide?"
"Look, father, the Erl-King is close by our side!
Dost see not the Erl-King, with crown and with train?"
"My son, 'tis the mist rising over the plain."

"Oh, come, thou dear infant! oh come thou with me!
Full many a game I will play there with thee;
On my strand, lovely flowers their blossoms unfold,
My mother shall grace thee with garments of gold."

"My father, my father, and dost thou not hear
The words that the Erl-King now breathes in mine ear?"
"Be calm, dearest child, 'tis thy fancy deceives;
'Tis the sad wind that sighs through the withering leaves."

"Wilt go, then, dear infant, wilt go with me there?
My daughters shall tend thee with sisterly care
My daughters by night their glad festival keep,
They'll dance thee, and rock thee, and sing thee to sleep."

"My father, my father, and dost thou not see,
How the Erl-King his daughters has brought here for me?"
"My darling, my darling, I see it aright,
'Tis the aged grey willows deceiving thy sight."

"I love thee, I'm charm'd by thy beauty, dear boy!
And if thou'rt unwilling, then force I'll employ."
"My father, my father, he seizes me fast,
Full sorely the Erl-King has hurt me at last."

The father now gallops, with terror half wild,
He grasps in his arms the poor shuddering child;
He reaches his courtyard with toil and with dread,--
The child in his arms finds he motionless, dead.

fr om a translation by
Edwin Zeydel

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Who rides so late where winds blow wild?
It is the father grasping his child;
He holds the boy embraced in his arm
He clasps him snugly, he keeps him warm.

"My son, why cover your face in such fear?"
"O don't you see the ErlKing near?
The ErlKing with his crown and train!"
"My son, the mist is on the plain."

"Sweet lad, o come and join me, do!
Such pretty games I'll play with you;
On the shore gay flowers their colors unfold
My mother has made you a garment of gold."

"My father, my father, o can you not hear
The promise the ErlKing breathes in my ear?"
"Be calm, stay calm my child, lie low
In withered leaves the night winds blow."

"Will you, sweet lad, come along with me?
My daughters shall care for you tenderly;
In the night my daughters their revelry keep,
They'll rock you and dance you and sing you to sleep."

"My father, my father, o can you not trace
The ErlKing's daughters in that gloomy place?"
"My son, my son, I see it clear
How grey the ancient willows appear."

"I love you, your comeliness charms me, my boy
And if you're not willing, then force I'll employ!"
"Now father, o father, he's seizing my arm
The ErlKing has done me the cruelest harm!"

The father shudders, his ride is wild
In his arms he's holding the shivering child
He reaches home with toil and dread.
In his arms, the child was dead.   


Scheme XAABC DDEE FFGG AAHH AAII FFDX JJKK LLMM XN LLBC AAEE OOGG AANN FFII HHAA JJBB LLMM
Poetic Form
Metre 1 11111101101 01011111011 1101101011 111101111 11111111111 110011111101 11101111011 11101101001 11111011111 11001111111 111101011001 11011111011 11011001111 01101111011 1110111101 101111101001 11111011111 110111111 11011111001 11101101111 11011001111 101111011111 1101101111 1011101011 11111111011 01101011101 11011011011 11001111111 0101111011 11011011001 1101111011 01011111001 1100101 101 1 11111111 110101011 110101011 111101111 1111011011 1111011 0111101 11011101 11110111 11011111 10111011001 11011101011 11011011111 010011011 11111111 01010111 111110111 1101111100 00111011001 11101101111 11011011111 011001101 11111111 11010101 111111111 01111011101 11011011011 011110101 010101111 01111001001 11011101 0110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,004
Words 582
Sentences 40
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

2:52 min read
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