Analysis of I Miss



I Miss
By Nancy Rodriquez

I miss going to your place every night,
watching old television shows from the past,
If I could wish with all of my might,
those days would have still been a matter of fact,
I miss your laughter, in good or bad jest,
kissing tender kisses and holding hands,
touching you was something I could not resist,
In reflection, why we are over with, I can not understand,
I miss being able to tell you my troubles too,
working together to solve them as best we could,
I miss working to make our dreams come true,
and looking back on our love that grew,
while doing all of the things we would do,
I miss the good times we would have,
being ourselves, relaxed,
before things became troubled and tossed,
and without you, I feel incredibly lost,
I thought of you as an anchor for a weary soul,
until your pride took control,
I miss us, being us.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11 110010 11101111001 1011001101 111111111 11111101011 1111001111 1010100101 10111011101 001011110111101 1110101111101 100101111111 11101110111 0101110111 1101101111 11011111 1000101 011011001 00111101001 1111111010101 0111101 111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 860
Words 183
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 20
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 336
Words per stanza (avg) 82

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Written on June 11, 2023

Submitted by txpoet65 on June 11, 2023

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Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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