Analysis of Sin within
I set here and look deep
within, flowing with
hatred and sin! I'm fight
this flam with the
wildness of the wind!
I'm suffocating can't
breath! These thoughts
run wild the air is thin.
I'm falling I cant breath,
can't see, can't fell!
Numb hurting within!
Again filled with hatred
and sin! I fall I can't get
up I'm fading with every
heart beat! Again I'm
filled with hatred and
sin! I try and breath
taking it all in the heat
from the flam of this
Pain, hatred and sin! I black
out and with no doubt I
think about what Id do
if I could do it all again!
Remember thy hatred
and sin, it took me out
and no I'll never do it
aging! I dig deep so
deep….. to be
continue..
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJHKLMNOIPQRSTUKVWXMT |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111011 01101 100111 1110 10101 11001 111 110111 110111 1111 11001 011110 0111111 11101100 11011 11100 11101 1011001 10111 1100111 101111 101111 11111101 010110 011111 0111011 101111 111 010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 668 |
Words | 140 |
Sentences | 14 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 29 |
Lines Amount | 29 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 501 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 134 |
About this poem
I was in a dark place!
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Written on September 01, 2020
Submitted by Pinkerton2022 on October 19, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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