Independence

Mathew L. Hunt 1973 (Los Alamitos, CA)



I headed down the difficult one
Where most would've found none.
Sometimes we achieve the least,
Walking down the path most free.

A party I belong to not,
For they don't have my thought.
Many a war has been wrought.
My support in either can't be bought.

What team do I favor you ask?
And point to them in dead last.
A winner is often the more popular,
But those who endure, with more character.

Milk comes from the store?
Who told you, I'll ignore.
The tractor, plow, and hoe are compliant,
Even Emerson and Thoreau wrote self reliance.

Of all I've learned, I know this to be true;
Listen not to the fools, but the king in you.

About this poem

Written when I was in graduate school.

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Written on March 05, 1998

Submitted by mathewhunt on May 11, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX BCCB XXDD EEXX FF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 630
Words 139
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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  • JdeLorenzo08
    Nice poetry, I enjoyed reading your work!
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