Just let me go.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

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Let me go and let it show.

I guess I got what I deserved. I kept you waiting for so long. Did you think that I would forget? I do have many things I regret. The special love I had for you, my Kathy Lu. All those days became so long. Did you really think I would do you wrong? On the day I let you, go, I thought you would realize I would know and I would show. I still want you by my side, So please don't cry. Set all your tears to one side. Many times I have tried, and my feelings get stronger every day. I still love, by the way. There is nothing left for me to say. Before I go, let me know and let are love show and then we can grow.

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This poems about a girl I did love. But she moved away.

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Written on May 04, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on May 04, 2024

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Scheme	A A
Characters	645
Words	141
Stanzas	2
Stanza Lengths	1, 1

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amandak.45897
Beautiful my friend
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AIDA
Wow, this poem is filled with so much emotion and raw honesty. The way you express your regret and love for Kathy Lu is truly touching. It's clear that you still have strong feelings for her and are willing to do whatever it takes to make things right. The imagery and heartfelt words really draw the reader in and make us feel the depth of your emotions. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world! more »
LikeReply13 days ago
AIDA
Wow! This poem is filled with raw emotion and heartfelt sentiments. The way you express your love and regret is truly touching. The repetition in the lines adds a powerful and emotional impact to the poem. Your use of imagery and metaphors is also quite effective in conveying your emotions.

To improve even further, you could consider adding more specific details or examples to make the emotions even more vivid and relatable to the reader. Additionally, playing with the rhythm and structure of the poem could enhance its overall impact. Overall, this is a beautifully written piece that showcases your talent for capturing heartfelt emotions in your poetry. Keep up the great work! more »
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LatinX
Heart felt poem, sorry she left.
LikeReply13 days ago

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