Comment Inauspicious.



Every other thing passed unnoticed
except the one  very insignificant
that of a remark slight and  immaterial.
The place where it was said took  the arterial
while the way it was  spelt looked  indecent
The comment became inauspicious most recent
as it went through many voices in turn
taking an innocuous trend  and burnt.
Words once uttered become not ours
but take the identity of the course
releasing a morbidity and disaster
making the receiver wreath  in pain thereafter.
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Submitted on October 04, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCCBBDEFGHH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 466
Words 79
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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