Analysis of Comment Inauspicious.



Every other thing passed unnoticed
except the one  very insignificant
that of a remark slight and  immaterial.
The place where it was said took  the arterial
while the way it was  spelt looked  indecent
The comment became inauspicious most recent
as it went through many voices in turn
taking an innocuous trend  and burnt.
Words once uttered become not ours
but take the identity of the course
releasing a morbidity and disaster
making the receiver wreath  in pain thereafter.


Scheme ABCCBBDEFGHH
Poetic Form
Metre 1001011010 0101100100 11001100100 011111100100 1011111010 01001010110 1111101001 1010100101 111001110 1100100101 010001000010 100010101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 466
Words 79
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 389
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted on October 04, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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