You did that

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



Lay back listening to the radio

Topic:
Bindi eye

Bindi eye?

You did that!

I realised

No crap

The bindies are gone.


Sing a new song

Another comes along

And another

And another

His glory goes on, and on, and on...

There is no end.

And He shares His glory with his friends


He is the story

Beware of the fake

He's alive and active

That cunning snake..


Who gets all the glory?

Big mistake.

The idols of silver
The idols of gold
All reputations
The puff and the blow

All will be tested
Fire refines
Then will be gathered
All that are mine.
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Written on May 10, 2024

Submitted by myway6119 on May 09, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XX X X B B X X X C D X D C XXXA XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 570
Words 150
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 4, 4

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