Analysis of You did that

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)



Lay back listening to the radio

Topic:
Bindi eye

You did that!

The bindies are gone.

Sing a new song

Another comes along

His glory goes on, and on, and on...

There is no end.

And He shares His glory with his friends

He is the story

Beware of the fake

He's alive and active

That cunning snake..

Who gets all the glory?

The idols of silver
The idols of gold
All reputations
The puff and the blow

All will be tested
Fire refines
Then will be gathered
All that are mine.


Scheme A XX X X B B X X X C D X D C XXXA XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111001010 10 11 111 0111 1011 010101 110110101 1111 011110111 11010 01101 101010 1101 111010 010110 01011 1010 01001 11110 1001 11110 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 570
Words 150
Sentences 9
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 4, 4
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Written on May 10, 2024

Submitted by myway6119 on May 09, 2024

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