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Some sickness are made!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)

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At times I have trouble breathing!
 I toss and turn trying to warm up!
I've even broken out a few times!
 Alone is how I remain all mine!
I need my health!
 Pain in my bones!
Day after day!
 Muscles that keep hurting!
I hate they even look my way!
 I do not like to eat out at times!
The food makes me sick!
 My stomach cramps and then begins to ache!
I've had a few jobs!
 Yet please do not offer a picnic to me!
I'll always end up at a desk!
 Perhaps, inside at my workspace!
Heat on and just writing about it again!
 Please keep your distance I hear you in the wind!
Do not come near me!
 For you really just make me sick!

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A poem about being sick day after day!

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Written on March 19, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on March 19, 2024

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Scheme ABCDEFGAGCHIJKLCMNKH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 625
Words 147
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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