Analysis of Some sickness are made!



At times I have trouble breathing!
 I toss and turn trying to warm up!
I've even broken out a few times!
 Alone is how I remain all mine!
I need my health!
 Pain in my bones!
Day after day!
 Muscles that keep hurting!
I hate they even look my way!
 I do not like to eat out at times!
The food makes me sick!
 My stomach cramps and then begins to ache!
I've had a few jobs!
 Yet please do not offer a picnic to me!
I'll always end up at a desk!
 Perhaps, inside at my workspace!
Heat on and just writing about it again!
 Please keep your distance I hear you in the wind!
Do not come near me!
 For you really just make me sick!


Scheme ABCDEFGAGCHIJKLCMNKH
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 11111010 110110111 110101011 011110111 1111 1011 1101 101110 11110111 111111111 01111 1101010111 11011 1111100111 1111101 0101111 11011001101 11110111001 11111 11101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 625
Words 147
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 464
Words per stanza (avg) 128

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A poem about being sick day after day!

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Written on March 19, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on March 19, 2024

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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