Analysis of Some sickness are made!
At times I have trouble breathing!
I toss and turn trying to warm up!
I've even broken out a few times!
Alone is how I remain all mine!
I need my health!
Pain in my bones!
Day after day!
Muscles that keep hurting!
I hate they even look my way!
I do not like to eat out at times!
The food makes me sick!
My stomach cramps and then begins to ache!
I've had a few jobs!
Yet please do not offer a picnic to me!
I'll always end up at a desk!
Perhaps, inside at my workspace!
Heat on and just writing about it again!
Please keep your distance I hear you in the wind!
Do not come near me!
For you really just make me sick!
Scheme | ABCDEFGAGCHIJKLCMNKH |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) Etheree (20%) |
Metre | 11111010 110110111 110101011 011110111 1111 1011 1101 101110 11110111 111111111 01111 1101010111 11011 1111100111 1111101 0101111 11011001101 11110111001 11111 11101111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 625 |
Words | 147 |
Sentences | 20 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 20 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 464 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 128 |
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A poem about being sick day after day!
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