God spoke to me about you



He said this one
 is not like the others!
That you’ve come across in the past
Take her the way you met her,
I said okay then Father!
What do you propose
 I’m listening?!
She is not to be tested

She has shown and proofed
that she is better that you
in many ways,
Humble yourself and LEARN,
listen, and be patient!
These are attributes of
a decent human being

Of a life you have always
aspire to have and wanted
This the one right in front of you,
can’t you see,
The humility in her,
is what’s in me
Learn to LOVE her
 unconditional or leave her to me!

About this poem

I was going through a rough patch with my wife, and didn’t know how to communicate with her, so I decided to put in a poem.

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Written on February 14, 2024

Submitted by nisedeigns001 on February 14, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXAAXBC XDEXXXB ECDFAFAF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 569
Words 127
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 8

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