Analysis of God spoke to me about you



He said this one
 is not like the others!
That you’ve come across in the past
Take her the way you met her,
I said okay then Father!
What do you propose
 I’m listening?!
She is not to be tested

She has shown and proofed
that she is better that you
in many ways,
Humble yourself and LEARN,
listen, and be patient!
These are attributes of
a decent human being

Of a life you have always
aspire to have and wanted
This the one right in front of you,
can’t you see,
The humility in her,
is what’s in me
Learn to LOVE her
 unconditional or leave her to me!


Scheme XXXAAXBC XDEXXXB ECDFAFAF
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 111010 11101001 1001110 111110 11101 1100 1111110 11101 1111011 0101 100101 100110 11101 0101010 101111 0111010 10110111 111 0010000 1001 1110 010011011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 569
Words 127
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 7, 8
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

I was going through a rough patch with my wife, and didn’t know how to communicate with her, so I decided to put in a poem.

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Written on February 14, 2024

Submitted by nisedeigns001 on February 14, 2024

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