Overwhelming



Like a heavy blanket made of stone
I'm drowning under its weight
Surrounded by others, yet alone
I'm searching, but there's no escape
Breathe in, then breathe out
I'll hold it in for as long as it takes
Wondering what this life is about
I'm focusing on my mistakes
Silence becomes overwhelming loud
I'll let the voices reign in what awaits
Time ticks on its unwavering throne
I'm sleeping, but I'm still awake
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Written on February 28, 2024

Submitted by CathleenKendall on February 28, 2024

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Scheme ABACDEDEFGAH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 412
Words 76
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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