Analysis of Overwhelming



Like a heavy blanket made of stone
I'm drowning under its weight
Surrounded by others, yet alone
I'm searching, but there's no escape
Breathe in, then breathe out
I'll hold it in for as long as it takes
Wondering what this life is about
I'm focusing on my mistakes
Silence becomes overwhelming loud
I'll let the voices reign in what awaits
Time ticks on its unwavering throne
I'm sleeping, but I'm still awake


Scheme ABACDEDEFGAH
Poetic Form
Metre 101010111 1101011 010110101 11011101 10111 1110111111 100111101 11001101 10010101 1101010101 111101001 11011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 412
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 325
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Written on February 28, 2024

Submitted by CathleenKendall on February 28, 2024

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