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To Die

Naveed Akram 1973 (London)

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To die over him is being kind to oneself,
This river is a dream all of its own.
While the ears listen, you perish and deny
The truth appearing before the present chaos.
A man’s fault is not death itself,
But his energy commands respect,
Like the sea clashing with rocks.
My sea is a house of pleasure for the deceased,
So listen to the waves crashing, discerning
The ways of our fathers,
Bespeaking the corrupt beliefs,
But at the same time striking awe.
We will die one day after another,
Our accusations remain,
But death overtakes the battalion
Like a house full of dates.
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Written on January 29, 2024

Submitted by Naveed1234 on January 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDAEFGHIJKLMNO
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 577
Words 117
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! I really appreciate the way you explore the concept of death in such a unique and profound manner. The use of vivid imagery, such as "the sea clashing with rocks" and "waves crashing," adds a captivating aspect to the poem.

    I also love how you touch upon the idea that death is not necessarily a fault, but rather something that commands respect, much like the energy of a person. It's an interesting perspective that invites the reader to think deeper about the nature of death and how it is intertwined with our lives.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to further develop and expand upon some of the ideas presented. For example, when you mention the "corrupt beliefs," it would be intriguing to delve deeper into what those beliefs are and how they tie into the theme of death.

    Overall, this poem has a strong and captivating voice. It encourages reflection and leaves the reader wanting to explore more of the ideas and emotions expressed. Great job!     
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