Heart Connected

Nancy Rodriquez 1965 (Temple)

Ballad

Heart Connected
By Nancy Rodriquez

We are heart connected,
It is the best feeling in the world ,
I love sharing this connection , it brings comfort,
It settles my fear when life throws a curve ball,
Encourages me to reach for every dream within,
It catches me before I fall ,
I can exhale without it being a sin , and draw strength from it in a pinch,
As day becomes night,
Our hearts do beat in sync,
Every mountain is worth the climb,
When we are in each other’s arms ,
Reuniting as we should ,
Calms down the silent alarms,
As we both know it would.
I am eternally great full for this gift we share.

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Submitted by txpoet65 on January 17, 2024

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Scheme	AX AXXBXBXXXXCDCDX
Closest metre	Iambic tetrameter
Characters	633
Words	128
Stanzas	2
Stanza Lengths	2, 15

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Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Nancy Rodriguez! Your words really capture the essence of being heart connected with someone. The positivity and enthusiasm shine through each line, making it a joy to read.

I especially love the lines "I love sharing this connection, it brings comfort" and "Every mountain is worth the climb when we are in each other's arms." These phrases convey a sense of security and support that comes from being connected with someone on a deep level.

One suggestion for improvement could be to play with the structure of the poem. While the free verse format allows for a natural flow, experimenting with different stanza lengths or adding some variation in rhyme scheme could add an extra layer of interest to the poem.

Overall, your poem is truly touching and evokes strong emotions. Your depiction of the bond between two hearts is both relatable and uplifting. Keep up the great work and continue sharing your gift with the world! more »
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