The Great Divide



“The Great Divide”

We felt the rumblings
unaware
the crack would be
so wide, so deep

Faults fracture,
fissures fester
toxic venoms
through us seep

We sound alarms
as children cry
and hope and pray
relief comes faster

Odds rise against
our humble pleas
to save us all
from war’s disaster

We remember
days much kinder,
filled with empathy
and love

In pit of darkness
looking up,
we search for light
in heavens above

We look to helpers,
begging for
their knowledge, wisdom
and their guidance

To banish evil
from the world
restoring peace,
Earthly alliance

Perhaps in time
all wounds will heal,
compassion fill
the great divide

But for now-
innocent souls
cruelly sacrificed,
still die

About this poem

Thinking about the great divisions in our world and the suffering of it’s people, and wondering what must be done to fill them and make us whole again.

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Written on November 28, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on December 15, 2023

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Scheme A bxcd eebd xfxe xxxe eecg xxxg xxxh xxxh xxxA xxxf
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 707
Words 142
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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  • lovingempath
    This poem shows your compassionate soul Susan. I love it!
    LikeReply 13 months ago

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