Voices and Visions”



“Voices and Visions”

Noisy thoughts bombard me
in night’s silence
Causing eery visions to appear
Monsters weep hot tears
upon my eyelids
Zeeping echoes magnify my fears

I lie awake and wonder,
will sleep find me,
Or am I too consumed
by gremlins of the night?
If only I could  leave
the noise behind me-
I would dream in peace
till morning’s light

I press my palms against my ears
to block the voices
My eyes clenched tight
to make the visions disappear
Then I realize
it’s all about my choices-
I can live with passion,
or be fossilized by fear

So I choose to let the voices
and the visions
Scatter seed inside my mind
and let them sow…
Unafraid now,
I give them their provisions
Made impotent, they acquiesce
…and go

About this poem

Obsessive thoughts can be challenging in our waking hours, and to a good night’s sleep as well. The best way to release ourselves from their hold, is to disarm them by ‘letting them be’, because fighting them only fuels their fire. This task is made more difficult by the horrific suffering we are all witnessing, too many experiencing on this earth. I pray, I hope, I dream, I imagine…a kinder, more loving world for our children and grandchildren.

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Written on September 30, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on October 16, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A BXCXXD XBXEXBXE DFECXFXC FAXGGAXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 748
Words 151
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 8, 8, 8

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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