unseen



i wouldnt say i am an attention seeker
i just wish someone would notice me
notice why ive been gone for so long
why ive been quiet

people are all around me
but no one can hear my voice
its like i am screaming underwater
as i watch everyone walk away from me
while i am slowly drowning

my feelings are pushed aside
making me feel as if i were a ghost
people walking right through me
as if im almost completely invisible
but im not
im right here
why cant anyone see that

it feels as though truly nobody cares
someday soon
im gonna disappear
and you wont have any idea
what happened to me
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Submitted by blueishollow on November 13, 2023

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Scheme ABXX BXABX XXBXXXX XXXXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 589
Words 120
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 7, 5

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