The Pirate Charlatan, a trick or treat tale



“The Pirate Charlatan”,
   a trick or treat tale

Sneaked aboard a pirate ship,
a charlatan sailed a stormy sea
Cutlass fastened to his hip,
striped breeches donned from waist to knee

Gold hoop dangled from an ear,
a black patch sat upon one eye
Loyal parrot ever near,
helped him pass long sea hours by

He stowed himself in bilge of stink,
while mateys plundered silver and gold
Tasty grog all day he’d drink,
that kept him warm from damp and cold

There he languored without harm,
but missed by pillagers up on deck
Soon discovered with alarm,
they grabbed him by his hairy neck

Cast into the dreaded brig,
he waited for the morning’s lashing
Thinking over what he did,
he shook about the gory gashing

Morning came and then it went,
hushed quiet lurked from up on high
In silence, many hours spent-
what next occurred he knew not why:

As the ship moored close to land,
fair lady pirates paid him visit
They gently took his trembling hands,
and led him out in jovial spirit

Good fortune though he thought he’d found,
hoodwinked was he by their devious prank
Gagged, and tight his hands they bound,
and walked him off the perilous plank!

Before he died, late lesson learned:
charlatans hide in sly disguise-
He his own true self he spurned,
dooming him to his drowned demise

About this poem

“The Pirate Charlatan” is a fun-spirited Halloween story with a simple but important message: be true to yourself, or suffer the consequences!

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Written on October 19, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on October 20, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX ABAB XCXC DEDE FGFG XXXD HCHC XIXI JKJK LMLM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,293
Words 260
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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  • MaggieRan26
    Sue,

    I really enjoy your poem when I was reading through for the contest! It was fun, with vivid imagery! You crafted a wonderfully poetic short story! I definitely had yours ‘pinned’!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • susan.brumel
      I was just reading through my poems and noticed I never thanked you for your kind words. They are most appreciated!
      LikeReply2 months ago
  • emergentauthor
    Although I voted for another, I just had to tell you that I love this poem! I am the head fiction writer for a small, online magazine, and write, mostly 80% old school, form poetry. I love to write sonnets and villanelles. And I noticed the tetrameter and trimeter you used almost immediately, and love the straightforward, sing-song quality of your poem. Reminds me of a lullaby, even a little Edward Learish, and well-paced. You even had a feminine rhyme in there! Great alliteration. And I like the title. Caught my attention immediately and made the poem stand out; charlatan is such a great word I almost never hear anymore. 
    LikeReply5 months ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you so much for your input. I’m so glad you enjoyed it because it was so much fun to write!
      I appreciate the support. Will look for your work as well. -Sue
      LikeReply 15 months ago
    • emergentauthor
      Thanks! If you have not, check out "The Shadow" and "The I of My: A Memoir of Death," two Poesque poems of mine I entered in this past contest for October.
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • Vixility
    This was both a delightful and well written work. The story—appropriate for the spirit of Halloween—was authentic and carried with it a moral import that we should all follow: do not be deceptive (as this has consequences) and (Polonius might agree) “To thine own self be true”.

    I’m also a sucker for traditional—and in this case, ballad—forms of poetry. The poem’s metrical cadence and rhythm made it very easy to read without trying to concentrate on its structure, but rather on its story.

    Kudos to the poet …
     
    LikeReply5 months ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you for the support, my friend. I always appreciate your great commentary, and analysis. I enjoyed your moving submission very much as well. In fact, it inspired me to write a poem about my favorite hospice patient. I may submit it this month. Thank you again! 
      LikeReply 15 months ago
    • Vixility
      I couldn’t agree more with ‘emergentauthors’ comments above. I pinned about 10 poems from the October contest and yours kept calling me back. It’s such a lovely write and the story of it is a perfect Halloween tale.

      Showed my daughter, she enjoyed it as well.
       
      LikeReply5 months ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you so much for your kind words of support. I appreciate them very much. So happy your daughter enjoyed it too!
      LikeReply5 months ago

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