Soldier Dad



You're far from distance,
But it's hard for acceptance.

Duty for our nation is perfect,
Duty for your nation is little imperfect.

You're succeeded in your mission,
 I hardly failed in my vision.

You left me very soon,
And mom said you went to moon.

The thing you did is not fair,
Who will be my caring pair.

You'll be packed from hard zone,
Safely to our sweet home.

Love Yuh soldier dad !

About this poem

This is all about a soldier's daughter who lost her dad in a war and expresses her feelings

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Written on November 05, 2023

Submitted by kowsalyaduraisamy2777 on November 05, 2023

Modified by kowsalyaduraisamy2777 on November 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA XX BB CC DD XX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 395
Words 91
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1

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