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Her eyes

Her eyes 1999 (Mashhad)

Free verse
روشنی بخش خیالم یاد چشمان تو شد
زان نگاه چشم تو این دل خرامان تو شد
بار الهی ظلمت عشق مرا دیوانه کرد
بنده ات را از غم هجران او بی خانه کرد
بار الهی خسته ام از زهر چشم خاکیان
از نگه های دروغین عشق های بی نشان
تا کجا بنده ات در پی عشق باید رود
تا چه وقتی دل من رنج فراق را می برد

About this poem

First I ask you please don't laugh after reading my poem. I wrote it when I was 16 and I read it in literature class just for fun. I described a person who loves someone and this love makes his world beautiful. But he couldn't receive to his love and because of that he suffers. He talks about his love with God and at the end he asks him how much time he should wait for his love and when he achieve her.

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Written on August 06, 2023

Submitted by Atefeh.khozeimeh1999 on August 06, 2023

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Characters 487
Words 68
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
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