Analysis of Her eyes

Her eyes 1999 (Mashhad)



روشنی بخش خیالم یاد چشمان تو شد
زان نگاه چشم تو این دل خرامان تو شد
بار الهی ظلمت عشق مرا دیوانه کرد
بنده ات را از غم هجران او بی خانه کرد
بار الهی خسته ام از زهر چشم خاکیان
از نگه های دروغین عشق های بی نشان
تا کجا بنده ات در پی عشق باید رود
تا چه وقتی دل من رنج فراق را می برد


Scheme
Poetic Form Palindrome
Metre 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1
Characters 487
Words 68
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 0
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 0
Words per stanza (avg) 68

About this poem

First I ask you please don't laugh after reading my poem. I wrote it when I was 16 and I read it in literature class just for fun. I described a person who loves someone and this love makes his world beautiful. But he couldn't receive to his love and because of that he suffers. He talks about his love with God and at the end he asks him how much time he should wait for his love and when he achieve her.

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Written on August 06, 2023

Submitted by Atefeh.khozeimeh1999 on August 06, 2023

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Her eyes

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