Our souls, place
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
As rivers ethereal speak to our souls
Flowing through time/space in spiritual ways,
And through each course of our lives,
changing form when necessary
to overcome each of many obstacles we must face
Whether in trickles of addition into a quiet spring
pouring softly within a world aglow
with happy sunlit pools of cool refreshing flow
of life or winds swirling gently about
with falling leaves in tow
Like kisses upon our faces,
like mama did once
In our ever-flowing dreams
of thoughts serene as echoes to recharge our souls,
remembering past lives
perhaps then we find our worlds
inclined to sleep.
Compressed, our minds rush off to be tested
By a world of ever-changing currents
in a rush to see it all.
Lest we take time to understand
when we are truly blessed.
We climb into an urge for movement
as if not/-we will be left behind
as if it were something so unkind…
find ourselves dropped into a state
of sadness we cannot fathom,
we sit left to our fate for as,
yet our minds are not yet refined to a point
where we recycle our energies, in overtime
To relate to our constant changing state
Fall sadly lost in the warm memories
of joy and happy times. In a teardrop serenade, abruptly taken by the spirit of all, against our will,
we take our fall or lost in the illusion
of thrall, tossed madly about
Lost in turmoil and confusion,
racing into the uncertainty
in the rapids of doubt and despair
even to be swept helplessly off the edge
In slow motion fantasies into freefall,
from unimaginable heights.
Over waterfalls
as we catch fleeting glimpses
smashing our hopes,
dashing storybook childhood dreams
are we are fed back from the raw edge of reality,
with all the blankets and teddy bears
get fed carefully back into the minds
of the next generation of souls
believing in the dream machine
chased by the mirrors from joyous wombs
from where they once sang in baby talk
of a great happily after,
happiness riding a beast
it seems somehow,
we have failed to master
Or are heavens merely illusions
In essence confusion
If we refuse to believe in ever,
somewhere from the skies
dropped a stone leaving ripples in effect
Creating whirlpools within our souls
As we remember, eddies in the flow
resonant drumbeats we somehow recognize
Echoes across the stars of biblical proportions
in practical solutions, anymore
Whenever our lives make a significant change.
Whenever we are faced with a scarcity of renewing challenges we see as if looking from afar
even as we face these questions
of how this life ever began.
Storms also form…
from the very same depths within,
gathering energy, our thoughts and ideas
mix and blend our worlds collide,
oft violently time and again
As we learn to improvise
Beyond our slash and burn insanity,
experience another truth about our greater selves
a leap of faith required to undergo metamorphosis
A growth lost in the depths of time
Seeking to find our true natural identity.
As we learn again, just who we are
Children of the sun
C2
Copyright ©2023 CEF2
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Written on 2020
Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023
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