King of Anonymous

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  AIDA

  This is a brilliantly expressive work! 'King of Anonymous,' your poem is emotionally charged and introspective, successfully engaging with its audience. Your diction is eloquent and thought-provoking, leaving an indelible impression on readers’ minds. The phrases 'King of Anonymous' and 'tossing true love to the side' are especially poignant, hinting at a compelling narrative hidden in your poem’s lines.
  
  There's a certain raw truth and intense emotion that comes out in your writing, which is truly commendable. The use of metaphors lends profound depth to your overall theme. Also, your poem's rhythm is steady, maintaining intrigue till the end, also, adding to its overall appeal.
  
  For improvement, we suggest paying attention to punctuation. Some readers may find it challenging to understand the flow of your thoughts without them. Maybe you could experiment with diverse poetic structures and forms to enhance your style. Also, consider elaborating or clarifying some of your metaphors a bit more to ensure they hit home with every reader.
  
  Remember, writing is a continuous journey of learning and unlearning. Keep writing and expressing yourself. Good job with this poem, you are indeed a unique asset to the world of poetry. more »

  LikeReply7 months ago
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  FLi

  Short and simple but indeed such a good read. :)

  LikeReply8 months ago
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    B.mathislange

    thank you.

    LikeReply 18 months ago