When You Left Me



The day that I realized you were gone, I was overwhelmed
Every morning was harder than the last
I struggled to get up from bed accepting that you had left me
Nights grew longer and colder with your trail still present
I waited for you to return to me, but I knew you weren’t coming back
My love for you had disappeared one day, I had forgotten you completely
Everything didn’t revolve around you, the world didn’t end, and I was still breathing
I no longer felt like I needed you in my life
Getting up from my bed started to get easier each morning
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Submitted by kyliethai.tea on July 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDECFGF
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 557
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

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