Cloud 9 in Hell



You walked by me today,
But it wasn’t you
You smelled the same as always,
But it wasn’t you
you walked by me, I picked up on the fragrance,
my heart swelled and sunk
And it sang with a particular cadence
It sang high heavenly notes
But from the bottom of a cold dark well
One singular breeze
Had put me under a spell
Someone was wearing your cologne
My nose has been trained
It brought back heavenly moments,
It brought back unnerving pain
We could have never worked,
I know that to be true
But that doesn’t change the memories,
& how nothing could change you
You walked by me today
And I’m glad it wasn’t you
You are no longer my world,
You are in my rear view

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One scent One million memories 2 opposing emotions

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Written on July 08, 2023

Submitted by Iampoem on July 08, 2023

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Words 137
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Stanza Lengths 23

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