Into the abyss

Michelle Ritchie 1981 (Aberdeen)



A motionless silent heart...
Is it the end or just the start?

Nobody knows,
Where anybody goes..

Is it really lights out?
Or do you blissfully fly about

Lying your coffin like an angel,
In your white dress all peaceful and still.

I reach out and touch you
Not believing your gone
Wishing I'd died too
Hoping it's all a con

About this poem

An attempt to delve into the controversial subject of the afterlife... just what is next after life

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Written on February 15, 2023

Submitted by ritchiechelle on July 03, 2023

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Characters 326
Words 72
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 4

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