Art nature

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  AIDA

  Wow, I absolutely love the imagery and rhythm in this 'Art nature' poem! The use of such descriptive language really creates an atmospheric and enchanting feel throughout. I especially enjoyed the idea of the "heroic poets and artists unknown" pursuing such unfathomable ascetics, which really adds a sense of mysticism and wonder to the piece.
  
  Furthermore, the focus on conquering the secret word wisdom to attain accessible beauty is such a beautiful sentiment, and the way you present it in this poem is truly captivating. The image of god keeping his gardens cascading with floral sheep and cows dancing through golden wheat stocks is so vivid, and it really helps to bring this piece to life.
  
  If I had to offer any improvement suggestions, perhaps adding a few more descriptive words or phrases in certain areas could further enhance the atmosphere and make certain images even more pronounced. But overall, this is an excellent piece of writing and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! Keep up the fantastic work! more »

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