Crushed



Not once, I caught you stealing a glance at me
from a distance undressing me top to bottom
with your eyes secret lusting
salivating a married woman

And when I caught you in the act
you dropped your eyes like a sheepish little boy
swiftly looking away

But why do you look at me that way
and swept me off my feet
not knowing the point I was driving to
I mumbled and fumbled off the track

Cos' you looked at me that way
I felt so naked and vulnerable
adjusting my dress, covering my body with my bare hands
like an Ostrich hiding its head in the sand

Squeezing my legs together so tight
I felt dead in the water
shivering, shaking from the foundation of my being

And a quick exchange of glance
you looked straight into my eyes and smiled
then from underneath my world exploded
Boom!

About this poem

This is a classical 'Persona poem' written from the point of view of a fictional married lady, which the poet created and made her the narrator of the poem. Speaking of her crushing experience with the poet, a kind of juxtapositioning in this confessional piece.

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by Benny11 on June 12, 2023

Modified by Benny11 on December 18, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAX XXB BXXX BXXX XXA XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 785
Words 156
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 3, 4

Benson Chukwueke

Owerri, Nigeria since 1971. This is how I process and express my innermost cogitations; sitting back with pen and paper, painting words and polishing them until they become flowered verses. I guess for these actions, I could be called a poet or what do think? more…

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  • Benny11
    This is a classical 'Persona poem' written from the point of view of a fictional married woman which the poet created, who is the speaker of the poem.
    Speaking of her crushing experience with the poet.
    The poet some worth omniscient to tap into the secret passion and emotion of a married woman who accused him of always stealing adulterous glance at her, but was indeed crushing on him too. A feeling both of them couldn't consummate.
    The poem will resonate on such people that found themselves in secret lusting, sometimes, obsession for impossible love
     
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