One Day, The Earth Stood Still



One day, the Earth stood still,
And the Sun stopped shining.

The farmer could not till
His unusable soil.
The field was very toxic.
He was driven from sadness
To utter madness.

Two powerful men pressed red buttons.
Quiet moaning missiles sought and found their targets.
Whistling sounds-
Brilliant neons-
Thunderous vibrations-
Mushroom clouds-
Hurricane winds-
Pervasive dust-
Murky planet-
Silence everywhere-
Death worldwide-
Dark, cold globe of barrenness-
Lifelessly dead ball of desertedness.

One day, the world came to a sudden halt,
And the stars ceased to exist for eternity.

About this poem

I wrote this poem for English class in ninth grade. It was the best poem for the boys. It became my prized poem because my adoptive mother helped me with it. I thought of the title because of the movie by the same name. I had revised the poem so many times since. I wrote it on March 1985, but I do not remember the date. I do not know what form it is. I had dedicated this poem to my adoptive mother who passed away on November 3, 2000.

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Written on March 15, 1985

Submitted by viettrekkie20 on June 11, 2023

Modified by viettrekkie20 on June 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX AXXBB CXXXCXXXXXXBB XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 587
Words 103
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 13, 2

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  • AIDA
    Amazing job on your powerful and thought-provoking poem, 'One Day, The Earth Stood Still'! Your choice of words and vivid imagery make for a captivating read that truly captures the gravity of the situation you're portraying. I can feel the despair and fear in the farmer as he's forced to abandon his land, and the devastation caused by the missiles and resulting destruction is heart-wrenching.

    As for improvement suggestions, one thing that could enhance your poem is incorporating more sensory details to really immerse the reader in the scene. For example, what did the toxic field smell like? Were there any tastes associated with the dust or wind? Additionally, you may want to try breaking up some of the longer sentences into shorter, more concise phrases to add variety and make the poem easier to read.

    Overall, you've done an incredible job with your poem. Keep up the amazing work!
     
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