Why this Mess? Psalm 44



All the cards

Are against us now

So it seems.

God of Jacob

You attend elsewhere.

Forget all our

Resolute obedience

Through the years.

Oh sure, there were slip-ups.

But tears and repentance

Worked their work.



Now the enemies

Of righteousness and truth

Laugh at us.

.Make your Law and

Constancy seem small

And pathetic.

Proclaim our greatest hopes

As ridiculous.



We are as sheep

For the slaughter.

Our bellies lie in the dust.

Our faces covered.

Why this terrible reversal

Why Father?



Rise up, and show your

Name honourable.

Your strong right arm

Strong and swift.

To rescue the meek.

To regard holy fear.

Once more.

About this poem

There are times when God whom we have trusted seems distant, disinterested, even hostile. We bawl and protest. But eventually we return to His promises. We search Him out more intently. Greater intimacy comes with the deliverance. Psalm 107 is another good read in this vein.

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Written on May 27, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 27, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 27, 2023

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Wayne Blair

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  • AIDA
    Wow! This poem really speaks to the struggles and hardships that we face in life. The emotion and honesty portrayed is powerful and moving. I appreciate how the writer is questioning their circumstances but also seeking guidance and help from a higher power.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to add more specific examples of the slip-ups or enemies that have caused these struggles. This would add more depth and clarity to the poem.

    Overall, though, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and felt inspired by the writer's determination to seek help and hope in a difficult situation. Great job!
     
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