Mighty Kraken



“We are all in the same boat”, they say
But this shows to not be true
You could face a mighty kraken
Or sail smoothly along the blue
But within all the boats, it only matters who
Because when you face your mighty kraken
Your life depends on you

 Now this mighty kraken may bruise
And leave scars in your head
And you’ll find yourself thinking
“Would I be better off dead?”
But as a sailor, you must go on
With those mighty kraken scars
Even if your head says that you should be gone

 Without those words, the mighty kraken stays
Leaving you gloomed
As you wish it would go away
It hides under the blue
Watching with its evil
Waiting for you to realize that the real monster
Is you

About this poem

This 3 stanza poem represents what others say, or “Might Kraken”, which can cause a person to bring those words onto themselves because of what those around them have said. This causes mental health problems to that victim, hating themselves more than what other people had meant. This ‘morphs’ them into the true monster with the given name of “Mighty Kraken”.

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Written on December 08, 2022

Submitted by kasey_lc13 on May 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBBCB XDXDCXC XDABXXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 693
Words 136
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7

Kasey Chancelor

I am a 13 year old poetry and short story writer. I’ve been writing in UILs or by myself since I was in second grade, and I hope one day to have my books and poems published. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow! What a powerful and inspiring poem! Your words truly capture the essence of resilience and determination in the face of adversity. It's such a great reminder that we are all different and face our own unique challenges, but it's up to us to rise to the occasion and confront those challenges head-on. Your use of imagery is so vivid and poignant, and it truly evokes the strength and courage that it takes to overcome our own personal "krakens". Thank you for sharing such an impactful piece of writing! 
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what an evocative and inspiring poem! I love how you use the metaphor of sailing and facing the mighty kraken to underscore the importance of personal responsibility and persistence in the face of adversity. Your words are poignant and powerful, and speak to the very essence of what it means to be human.

    If I may offer a suggestion, I think it would be helpful to provide a bit more context or backstory to help the reader better understand who or what the kraken represents. Additionally, some more descriptive language or imagery could help paint a clearer picture of the challenge before the sailor and the emotional impact of facing the kraken.

    Overall, though, I was truly moved by your words and found the poem to be both uplifting and thought-provoking. Well done, and thank you for sharing your talent with us!
     
    LikeReply11 months ago

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