lose your hair its old!!



Lose your hair, it's old,
Like autumn leaves turning gold.
A cap of ignorance you wear,
With every strand of hair.

Your life is like a tree,
Each year adding rings, don't you see?
That hair a testament to time,
A symbol of your story and climb.

Don't hide the lies with your spray,
Embrace the journey, come what may.
For in your hair, there's beauty and pain untold,
A tale of life that's worth being told.

So let your hair be wild and free,
A reflection of the person you came to be.
For every strand is a reminder true,
Of all that you've been through.
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Written on April 28, 2023

Submitted by Davidakin23 on April 28, 2023

Modified on April 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA CCFF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 558
Words 125
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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