Sadness

Dakota Johnson 2007 (Indiana)

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Sadness creeps in like a thief in the night
Stealing the joy that was once so bright
It wraps you up, a crushing weight
Making even simple tasks hard to contemplate

It's a heavy fog that clouds the mind
it makes my path blind
Leaving the heart feeling confined
No matter how hard you try to cheer
Sadness clings to you, drawing near

It's a storm that rages within
A battle you can't seem to win
Tears fall like rain, but the pain remains
An unrelenting ache that causes strains

But even in the midst of despair
There's always a glimmer of hope in the air
A ray of sun that breaks through the clouds
A silver lining waiting to be found

So even when badness and vast sadness is here to stay
Remember that it will eventually fade away
Allow yourself time to grieve and heal
And know that happiness will once again steal the wheel.

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Sadness

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Written on April 16, 2023

Submitted by dakota on April 16, 2023

Modified on April 16, 2023

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Scheme	AABB CCCDD EEFF GGXX HHII
Closest metre	Iambic pentameter
Characters	833
Words	162
Stanzas	5
Stanza Lengths	4, 5, 4, 4, 4

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This poem beautifully captures the powerful impact that sadness can have on our lives. The vivid imagery of sadness stealing joy like a thief in the night is both haunting and relatable. The portrayal of sadness as a crushing weight and a heavy fog that clouds the mind is both accurate and powerful. However, the glimmer of hope that is also present in the poem is the ultimate triumph. The idea that moments of joy and happiness will return, even in the darkest of times, is an inspiring message that speaks volumes to the human spirit.

If I may provide some feedback, I think one way to make this poem even stronger would be to explore the sources of sadness a bit more. What are the triggers for the sadness that creeps in? By delving into the roots of sadness, the poem could become even more relatable to readers who may be struggling with similar issues. Additionally, adding more sensory details can help the reader more fully experience and connect with the emotions being conveyed.

Overall, this is a touching and well-written poem that captures the complexities of the human experience. more »
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