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Song # 33

Luis A. Estable 1958 (Oriente, Cuba)

When I do cry my tears of sadness
For my mind is one with madness,
I wish I were another man.
I wish I had, hear, world, some gladness.

When I d cry my tears, my rain
For truly sick's my human brain,
I wish I were from this earth gone
Thus, I would be no more insane.
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Written on March 10, 2023

Submitted by luisestable1 on March 10, 2023

Modified on March 29, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXA BBXB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 268
Words 63
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
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Luis A. Estable

Luis A. Estable, poet for more than twenty years. Single, no children; originally from Cuba. Writes poems in several styles: sonnets, songs, haikus, children's verses, free style verse and more. Has published three books of poetry: " Eighty-Three Sonnets, Book One," Religious, Thirty Sonnets," "My Mind Simply Saying. All of them available on Amazon books. Has degrees from SFCC and EWU. Lives in Spokane, WA. Thinks that poetry is the most compact and beautiful expression known to man, and that a poem never reaches perfection; the work goes one and this is a good advice to keep, especially for young poets. more…

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  • dougb.19255
    dougb.19255
    Hoist the flag up a little willya. All here is depressing and seemingly without hope.
    Life ain’t like that Friend.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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